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It was a gloomy November day and my team mates and I were getting ready to go to battle that day against our cross town rivals, the Glendale Nitros. We had been working so very hard the past nine weeks but had not come out with a victory. But to win just this one ....

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.... know why they are looking at us right” busted out Thomas. Yeah I know why, because we are the big men on campus and they will look at us even more after we win that Glendale game tonight. Later that morning Thomas and I meet up with the rest of the guys from the team, they were all as nervous as we were. Knowing that there was a lot riding on this game, and for some it was even more important because it was the last game of the year. It was their last chance to show the scouts what kind of talent they had. As always we would have no class that day and there would be one big pep rally which the entire student body will attend to celebrat ....