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This year many students will apply for hips but the number of hips will not even approach the demand of the students. In this situation it is up to the hip agencies to decide who is the most deserving of these funds. I believe that I am the most qualified applic ....

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.... a heavy load of classes I have found time for extra- curricular activities. I have been involved in golf, Science Olympiad, math team, Business World, T.E.A.M.S., and I have been involved in various band functions. I also have had a part-time job at the local grocery store since the summer after my sophomore year. I usually work approximately 20 hours a week during the school year. With the education I will receive while attending a world-class university I am sure I will have a positive effect on society. Being an engineer I will be involved in designing many products that affect everyone. I will use my acquired skills to make sure every pro ....